Happy Friday, y'all!
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Chapter IV - Out Of The Frying Pan and Into The Fire
She dragged herself to the edge of the pond, only to find Kaito-san standing there with that smug, superior grin she hated.
"Hello, Kate."
Exhausted and in shock, she mumbled: "Kaito-san, help me out of here--for old times sake?"
Pointing the pistol at her head, he said "Sorry-- can't, Katie-san. Sumimasen..."
BLAM! went the gun...
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Oh no...CLIFFHANGER!!!!! (C:
Friday, November 16, 2007
55FFF - Chapter IV
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Very cool!!!
If you want to join the 55 blog site, send me an email at: minzesm@comcast.net
Holy...
No.
No way did he actually kill her...
--snow
I come here & what do I see? A WHOLE BUNCH OF 55VES!
Well I never...
That is a great climax scene! I guess it is a continuation of some Saga going on here. Must catch up!
Uh oh. Nicely done.
Hey Mike:
Cool, I'll email ya when I get back home. Thanks!
Snow: guess you will have to wait for next week's episode to see how this plays out! (C:
Mona, glad you enjoyed it. I've read lots of great 55s, and I'm glad I can be part of the club! Hope you enjoy the back-stories.
Charles--like I said to Snow, you'll have to wait to see what happens! Oh by the way, I used your 55FFF-writing tool to do this week's story and last, and it's awesome!
Are you using the Gadget? I've added a clear button to it, but I've neglected the original.
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